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UNAMED ENEMY
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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STEPPING STONES OF SLIVERS UNDER MY FEET SWOLLEN NOW WITH TINY BEADS OF RAZOR SWEAT CONFRONTING AN ENEMY THAT HAS NO NAME REMEMBERING THE ENDING OF THIS SEEMINGLY ENDLESS GAME THE LIGHT UNBLOCKED THE STONES OVER TURNED FINDNING OUT WE WEREN'T THE ONLY ONES BURNED PICKING UP THE TOSSED TOWEL AND WIPING OFF THE SWEAT HOPING THAT THIS IS A MOMENT THAT WE WILL SOON FORGET ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I like the write and the way it's presented but I am having trouble placing the subject/topic of the piece. Call me brainless, but could you elaborate? I'll come back to check for a reply. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
It's about the battles that we all fight and the painful paths that we take in order to survive and grow in life. The stepping stones made of slivers etc....enemies with no names...our selves being the our own worse enemies....picking up the tossed towel that presumably is left there after soemone else gave up....the will to succeed and win against all odds. Hope that's clear enough......... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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