Open Poetry #43 |
Bones Dreams Too |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones dreams of being a big and tough older guy. He dreams of being a man— a man who will walk down the street, a man with a mission, a man going somewhere, a man to be respected. However, lurking in the back of his mind, he has this hunch that this dream will not be attainable— no, not for him. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Everyone has a right to dream, I would say, dear Bobby. And especially the number one dream of all humans: to be loved and respected. He doubted and under those circumstances I understand that he had some difficulty of trusting his dreams to manifest. Sad. Well done. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, Well, one never knows. Let's not forget, Bones bones are full of surprises. Love Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sometimes life surprises us even in the most desperate circumstances. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, Yes, what you say is very true. I've seen it happen. Love Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you Bobby for another interesting read, I always notice that your characters are moved by courage, this is a lesson for us... regards yann |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
thank you Bobby for your wonderful poem we hope more Accept my humble pass thank you my respect Nourzihane |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ouch - and tears for Bones. - Owl |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yann, Thanks for the very kind words on this poem. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Nourzihane, For your kind words. It's nice to see you here. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Owl, Yes, the poetic Bones never made it out of childhood. The real one is doing well, and sends his greetings. Love Bobby |
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