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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 catch my breath, release it into your heart, warm love allows it to expand, My soul dipped kiss, remains a stain, pressed into your memory, My thoughts, your thoughts, my eyes, your eyes, my heart, your heart, Take one whisper of, "I Love You" wrap it around me tight, So I can dream, a thousand dreams of you, never to awaken . |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This suits your name well. *S* Beautifully romantic! *S* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
From one southern gal to another, thank you so much! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am especially fond of: “catch my breath, release it into your heart… allow it to expand,” and: “Take one whisper of, "I Love You" wrap it around me tight, So I can dream, a thousand dreams of you, never to awaken.” applause for this Romantic 'penning'! |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Some poems that don't have ryme, don't catch my attention as much. This one did. I loved it. Beautiful expression. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
ARH - beautiful, I especially like: "My soul dipped kiss, remains a stain, pressed into your memory.." Very ..um...expresive, I can feel it... CG |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
I rather like this but I am sorry to admit, unromantic soul that I must be, I found it difficult to read the script and so I lost the flow. I managed it after a few attempts and, as I said, I enjoyed the sheer romanticism of the work. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Good to see ya back ARH-writing as beautiful as ever. vic |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EXTREMELY! a  !!!Lovely Write ARH, glad to see you up and writing with your quill!~ Bless the Parchment!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Back to the top...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved this exquisitely exotic phrase: "soul dipped kiss" your words are beautiful |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear A Romantic Heart, You do way good work. This is beautiful writing. I liked the picture too. Love Bobby |
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