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Open Poetry #43

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MexicanLover13
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since 2008-08-26

Posts 8

0 posted 2008-09-10 11:48 AM

The First Time
When I look in your eyes the first time,
I cried
When I seen you take your first step,
I cried
When I seen your tears fall from your little cheeks,
I cried

You made my heart beat twice,
You had my soul flowing,
You made me feel whole,

Now he took you away from me,
I’m empty inside, I cant breath,
My eyes feel with tears, they drop on my chair,
I look around, but I see you nowhere,

Daddy said were going somewhere,
But he didn’t say mommy wasn’t going to be there,
His little hands touch his face, to wipe his own tears,

THIS IS ALL I HAVE FOR NOW BECAUSE IM TO SAD TO FINISH
THIS IS TO MY LITTLE BOY DAVID ANTHONY MUNOZ JR
DADDY CANT HAVE U THAT LONG MOMMY PROMISES TO BE BACK..

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2008-09-11 11:10 AM

Thank you for sharing your innermost feelings with us. Poetry is a wonderful way to express yourself in times of duress. And welcome to Passion in Poetry as well.

You'll find our poetic home to be a very satisfying place - We look forward to reading more of your work.

Nancy

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