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Open Poetry #43

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2008-09-10 12:41 PM

My pen is bleeding on the paper,

As love is bleeding in my heart.

Each word's the bare truth -

Put these words to music,

Play this music on the strings of my soul,

If you don't tear them, I'm yours.

If you see me dying,

Will you hold my hand through this hell?

Will you save me like you did once?

You know where to find the way

To the temple of my hope.

And I don't know...

If only I had died tomorrow,

Would you've turned back time,

So that tomorrow'd never come?

And if I asked you

To kill me with your bare hands,

Just not with your indifference... would you?

I can't breathe the air of fear.

I'm suffocating... will you hold me in your arms

To chase the fear away?

Will you breathe life into me?

Will you forgive me the weakness of one day

If I'm your shield for all the lifetime?

If I could live an hour of your life,

Dwell in your inner world that's just your own,

I'd turn to real your most precious dreams.

And if you realize

I love you with each ounce of my heart,

Will you ever say goodbye?

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

1 posted 2008-09-10 04:41 PM

Wow awesome write!

Inspired-8

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-09-10 08:32 PM

Yo A Beautiful Disaster,

This is well executed. I rather like it.

Love Bobby

sklagurl17
Junior Member

since 2008-09-08

Posts 43
nc.

3 posted 2008-09-11 12:00 PM

This is amazing.

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