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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-09-09 03:04 PM

Cloud Scaping

The morn brought upon us ...
thunderous roars,
a showing of strength
from the southern shores.

Storm clouds were shaping...
the after of dawn,
with the beginnings of stirring
from a night of withdrawn.

Freeing the raindrops...
from the high of above,
releasing to cleanse
thoughts harboring love.

For the lune of the moon...
behind cloudscaping view,
brought the somewhere in time
to those moments of you.

In this poet's corner...
dreams hold their own,
to be challenged by words,
upon thoughts lined on loan.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

1 posted 2008-09-09 05:28 PM

I liked it. It's raining here now. seem apropriate.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2008-09-09 05:33 PM

Thank you WT, I am in PA so we were getting some residue from Hannah...a terrific lightning show in the morning.

M

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-09-09 07:06 PM

quote:
For the lune of the moon...
behind cloudscaping view,
brought the somewhere in time
to those moments of you.

How absolutely beautiful, dear Maureen! Love your words, as well as the picture!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2008-09-10 01:59 PM

So very lovely, Maureen. I hope the lightning display wasn't too frightening.

- Owl

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

5 posted 2008-09-10 03:01 PM

Watching a storm - from a safe position - is an exhilarating experience. Nature constantly reminds us that she is more powerful than anything we can produce.
This is a well observed poem.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2008-09-10 03:24 PM

love it

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2008-09-11 06:32 AM

Thank you, just the remnants of a storm in an early morning display.

M

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2008-09-11 11:08 AM

Good, I'm glad it wasn't frightening.

- Owl

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

9 posted 2008-09-11 12:10 PM

Beautiful thoughts raining down from your pen in this one and ...
----------------------
In this poet's corner...
dreams hold their own,
to be challenged by words,
upon thoughts lined on loan.
------------------------

Well that is it exactly isn't it?

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2008-09-12 06:58 AM

Thank you Owl.

Mark, that is exactly how it is. These words written by others are loaned to us line by line to either encourage us, cheer us up or comfort each other.

Again, so nice to see you here.
p.s. I always wondered about your picture and if you work with animals...not knowing the story behind it

M

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