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CMP
Junior Member

since 2008-07-23

Posts 22
England

0 posted 2008-09-09 05:53 AM

A Kiss

Soft and full, they part to tease
Lips so tender, eager to please
Their loving fullness, as they brush
My neck, my cheeks, colour as they flush
Red and moist, soft lips excite
Playful as they caress so light
An exchange of passion, a show of love
Tender kisses as mouths together move

A playful arousal of your senses and mine
Tongues flicker and dance as they entwine
Discovering, probing deep inside
Warm and dark, together they glide
A wet, moist awakening that is shared
Tasted and felt as passions are bared
Feelings caress, stimulate, arouse
A kiss that’s felt as deep as we allow

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

1 posted 2008-09-09 08:39 AM

This is great. It describes kissing someone so well. Normally, we think of kissing and just automatically relate to what follows- but this really focuses on the kissing itself and how much of a connection it is. Awesome write!!!

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

2 posted 2008-09-09 03:48 PM

It is interesting when you think of all the reasons why we kiss; we kiss our loved ones, we kiss "to make it better", we kiss to make up, we kiss hello, we kiss goodbye, we kiss good morning, we kiss good night, we kiss living people, we kiss dead and dying people - and we kiss to betray.
Well done for a well written poem.

(Hmmmm... there's a poem there somewhere)

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2008-09-09 04:24 PM

"A playful arousal of your senses and mine
Tongues flicker and dance as they entwine"

my favorite of your lines

M

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

4 posted 2008-09-09 05:02 PM

Makes me want to kiss someone.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-09-11 06:20 PM

A pleasure to read...James

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