Open Poetry #43 |
No one Knows |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
No one Knows No one is around here So don't be afraid Come closer to me Love is not a game I call your name When I dream No one knows how much I love you? From bottom of my heart Only you and me I am here with you And you are here with me So no one knows Let us be the one Forever and ever No one knows |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Nice dear Vandana, That's just the way it should be. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you vandana for the lovely words and feelings....You are so right : no one knows.... have a nice day yann |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
There is a refreshing simplicity to this that makes it so readable - again and again. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The touch of secrecy makes it all the more enjoyable. Very lovely, dear vandana. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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