Open Poetry #43 |
I'll Always Come Home |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"Most people run away from tornadoes. I run to them. You gotta take risks in life if you wanna get some great footage." -Dixie Alligood, stormchaser like lightning, my name fleeting- life somehow changed me, resources are depleting. Hard roads taken, hair growing gray, haven't been able to think of things I want to say. But it's okay. I'm still keeping home in my heart though I'm out there trying to make my Erin Brockovich moment before I realize I'm dying so I want you to know that in writing this poem I am never too far away and I'll always come home. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hope you make it home, Dixie. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My dear friend Dixie, I love your philosophy and this sensitive and significant write shows you are doing the right thing. Gray hair isn't a problem, but I wish you to solve the problems that might cause them to appear. May you always feel the warmth of home. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. You should, at least as a hobby, see if there’s anyone willing to publish you . . . John . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm liking the subtle changes in your poetry, Dixie~ This is really nice. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Awesome. Loved the stormchaser's quote, too. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Hi, Passing Shadows, we are forever changed, are we not, by the strongest storms? Well done, PS, TB |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You are an inspiration. It is always wonderful to read your work and your honesty w/regards to the struggles you are so bravely facing. I know that when I read some of your heartwrenching pieces I am greatful to know that I am not alone in the struggle of being human. It gives hope....maybe your Erin B. moment is touching people right here, in your blue home...thank you...kat |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Home is where the heart is...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each your replies touch me more than you know |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Hard roads taken, hair growing gray, haven't been able to think of things I want to say. But it's okay." Sounds familiar... but I am glad you are following a newer and better path~~ M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"I'm still keeping home in my heart though I'm out there trying to make my Erin Brockovich moment before I realize I'm dying" Wonderful, Dixie! |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
I've known those hard roads myself and the grey,lol, but inspiring to see your work take a different path. keep it up. lis |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such affirmation! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Passing Shadows there is definately no place like home, no matter where you travel or what you do so don't leave it to long before you return. Don't worry about the gray hair, enjoy the fact that you have grown old enough to have gray hair and that's a plus. Good luck my dear. Lindsay |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I missed you. :-) |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dixie...Keep chasing those storms girl, just be careful and don't let them turn on you. Be careful & keep safe and like you say always come home...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Erin Brockovich ...OUah I like your poem, I'm fond of this movie. yann |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it is so wonderful to see all of you here...so much so that it makes me sad that i cannot spend as much time here as I'd like to these days all the great poetry is passing by but I will play catch-up one day soon! and Meghan! It's so good to see you!!! I have missed you too, my friend! please stick around! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Hard roads taken, hair growing gray, haven't been able to think of things I want to say." Water's still wet, and we still breathe the same air, dear friend, and I find I love more and make allowances more for those who resemble the above stanza you penned - - - they are me, I am them....you and I, our hearts touch, though we most likely never will. I remember you. . . each and every day. jimmy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you Jimmy you mean a lot to me |
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