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Open Poetry #43
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MsMelissaMae
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since 2008-08-28
Posts 26
Indianola, Iowa
0 posted 2008-09-04 06:29 PM

At Times

At times I want to kiss your eyes,

to thank them for the glimpse of your soul

At times I want to kiss your hands,

for baring the strength to fix anything

At times I want to kiss your chest,

because I crave the smoothness of your skin

At times I want to kiss your back,

and every freckle that lies on it

But most the time its just your lips

since they will always return the favor
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-09-04 07:20 PM

Delightful! The conclusion brought a big smile!

Love,
Margherita
MsMelissaMae
Junior Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 26
Indianola, Iowa
2 posted 2008-09-05 12:41 PM

Thank you for your comment...it always feels good to know that someone enjoys what you have written!
TheAnonDavid
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since 2008-08-28
Posts 237
UK
3 posted 2008-09-05 05:36 AM

This is a delightful poem.
It has a smooth progression leading to a satisfying conclusion that raises a smile.
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