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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2008-09-04 06:17 PM

I am the setting sun.
I love my reflection
within the blue sky
of your soulful eyes.
I will carry with me
the pure bliss I felt
when I was at my zenith
above your river of love

Remember ...
Golden streams
of everlasting energy
peacefully transit
through space and time
to pour the essence
of our unfathomable love
into the divine vastness
of eternity.

MsMelissaMae
Junior Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 26
Indianola, Iowa

1 posted 2008-09-04 06:48 PM

lovely write...I thoroughly enjoyed this!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-09-04 07:51 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-09-04 09:20 PM

Yo dear Margherita,

This is a lovely picture and poem.

I haven't seen the setting sun in a number of years.

We can't see it from town.

The setting sun would be a surprise to many small children here, like green grass.

That's okay, they will get to see it someday. If they are lucky.

Love Bobby

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

4 posted 2008-09-05 05:17 AM

This paints a colourful picture of a sight that everyone should be able to see as a birthright. Maybe it should be dedicated to those who can't see it.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

5 posted 2008-09-05 05:23 AM

[This message has been edited by nourzihane (09-05-2008 06:17 PM).]

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2008-09-05 11:23 AM

Beautiful write and I especially liked the following ...

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I love my reflection
within the blue sky
of your soulful eyes.
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A true pleasure to read

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2008-09-05 02:32 PM

Hi Margherita, your poem has vastness, no limit, like beauty and love that you describe, very enjoyable to read....

regards

yann

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

8 posted 2008-09-06 12:18 PM

"Golden streams
of everlasting energy
peacefully transit
through space and time"- It is a serene feeling that is being poured into me while reading this.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2008-09-07 06:13 AM

Thank you all my beautiful poet friends for reading and commenting so kindly.

Have a wonderful Sunday.
Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-09-07 11:18 AM

This is beyond beautiful Margherita!

Excellent Write Dearest poet

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2008-09-07 11:32 AM

Dear Michael, thank you so much! Please come with your Arctic Wind and wrap me in your cool air ... I am melting here in Rome, it is soooooooooooo hot.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

12 posted 2008-09-07 03:41 PM

Beautiful Margherita.

Love,
Eric

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

13 posted 2008-09-10 09:44 AM

Well, I certainly wouldn't let the sun set on your lovely words without reading them first but seeing as I'm a bit late I reckon there have been a few sunsets already. However, I am here now and what a treat!

Love
Helen

sklagurl17
Junior Member

since 2008-09-08

Posts 43
nc.

14 posted 2008-09-11 12:21 PM

Simply Amazing!
I look forward to reading more.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

15 posted 2008-09-11 07:26 AM

I will carry with me
the pure bliss I felt
when I was at my zenith
above your river of love

enveloping and very well written...enjoyed this so much...
thank you

Love
Lee J.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

16 posted 2008-09-11 08:22 AM

"Golden streams
of everlasting energy
peacefully transit
through space and time
to pour the essence
of our unfathomable love
into the divine vastness
of eternity."

This is expressed exactly as I feel when love is radiated. Such description!!! Loved this verse!

~miscellanea

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

17 posted 2008-09-11 10:25 AM

I enjoy your views. How do you post the pictures? I would like to add to my poetry.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

18 posted 2008-09-12 06:47 PM

Thank you all, my dear Poet friends for reading and commenting so kindly!
Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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