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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-09-04 05:45 AM

I didn't expect you to be there yesterday
but I did look for your footprints
and that pale place below your ear

where those shiver bumps come from
when you touch yourself with fingers
and pretend that we are kiss dancing

and you open your mouth sometimes
like you are going to say something
but you don't and just sigh or

moan something from inside you
and your eyes do funny things
like they are sleepy or

just want to close with me in them
and then you look back at me sternly
to see if my mind has already gone there

and written love words again, without you
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daark

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-09-04 11:48 AM

"I didn't expect you to be there yesterday
but I did look for your footprints"

man this part, just hit my heart so hard.
loved it.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2008-09-04 11:51 AM

glass etchings for the journals of tomorrow are my favorite for sure. As always a treat to pass a glance on your pen trails sir. Well done.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-09-04 12:46 PM

Sueseasizzle thank you babe for your soft places here.

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Friend Mark, humble thanks guy for the read and comments.

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

4 posted 2008-09-04 06:36 PM

lost in the moment
the wetness pools at our feet
on slow dance beaches.

Indigo

MsMelissaMae
Junior Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 26
Indianola, Iowa

5 posted 2008-09-04 06:45 PM

beautiful...absolutely wonderful! You grab a tight hold of the reader with your begining verse and hold us hostage till the end! Great!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2008-09-04 07:02 PM

ms indi, thank you babe for being barefoot here...

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ms melmae, thank you so much for your eyes here

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-09-04 07:15 PM

permanent heartprints
upon the deep sands of time
while slow kiss dancing

Your words are deeply inspiring, dear D., and induced me to imitate indigo's very lovely way of replying in haiku form.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-09-05 05:56 AM

ms mar, thank you lady friend

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2008-09-05 08:33 AM

The title was enthralling,
the read quite satisfying, indeed.
You work as well in sand as in kiss dancing.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2008-09-05 09:46 AM

Ms diamond. Thank you for your soft smile touch

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2008-09-13 09:08 PM

I love this view through your eyes, DS~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2008-09-14 06:03 AM

ms bluezy, thank you lady friend

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2008-09-14 11:33 AM

All of the lines are a distinct blessing.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

14 posted 2008-09-14 11:36 AM

"and written love words again, without you"

i KNOW this place
and it is a sad, sad place to be

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

15 posted 2008-09-14 02:00 PM

ms sun, thanks lady friend for that touch

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ms slick...always a shoulder here if you want to lean your head on it and just dance..thanks babe

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

16 posted 2008-09-17 05:43 AM

Now this is really perfect, as your poetry always reminds me of dance - whether ballet, or a samba... or just a nice slow kissdance.

You always have just the right cadence as you dance to the beat of your own drummer.
I love this muchly

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

17 posted 2008-09-17 05:46 AM

ms ice, you bless me with your words, thank you

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