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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Stages In the beginning you focus on those things you have in common. You're looking for reasons to stay not reasons to quit and go away. You brush aside all those things that don't seem to be just right, giving in to desire and not wanting to give up the fight. There comes a time when you would do almost anything to keep it from falling apart and then a time when you can accept its demise and a time to heal a broken heart. JamesLee 02September 2008 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
that about covers the inevitable 'way of things'... truthful 'write'! applause! |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
It ends up this way all too often. Well observed. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
It is splendid James....I like the change of feelings between the beginning and the end, the accepting of the "defeat" good work yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wise words from you, dear James! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you secondhanddreampoet, The Anon David, 2islander2 and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James |
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