Open Poetry #43 |
Drifter |
Pestillence Junior Member
since 2008-09-03
Posts 25England |
Life is like the open ocean, A world that ripples in your hand, People wave from a distant shore Calling you back to your homeland. They say life should be well planned, A route to guide you back home, Keep the home fires burning at heart Don't let it corrupt into stone. But which path to choose in this maze? A place that goes on ever and ever, It is impossible to plan everything, Easily driven insane by that endeavour. The people look at me and sneer, Contempt within their pitch and tone, They count coins and notes all day, A long slog at which they moan. But I am free to walk where I wish, Drifting from place to place, Smiling at the paradise found As I gaze upon your pretty face. Perhaps I have found my true home? Where I can settle with a girl like you, But sadly I am a drifter deep at heart, Adieu my love, we'll meet in pastures new. |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
Hello and welcome to PiP. Your debut poem is excellent in the reading showing good poetic balance. Enjoy your time on here - I have been posting only a short while but there is encouragement in plenty. I hope you have the same experience. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I can't believe this got over looked...and welcome! Better late than never :-) The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Stacey011 Junior Member
since 2008-10-27
Posts 18Australia |
That's really amazing. Wonderful stuff. It starts of with something totally different than what i first thought it was about. Totally puts a different spin on it when you read the last paragraph. Can't wait to read more. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Must have been a busy week when you posted, Poet. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Enjoyed this insightful write. Welcome to Passions! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James... a belated welcome from me to our pages blue.. I did enjoy first poem and hope to read more of your work... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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