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Lonesome Hearts |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Morning’s chill touched them as the distant sound of a lonesome loon trilled the darkness. She knew this would be his time, a time for a slight touch of love’s invitation...when hands held and eyes shimmered and waters fell delicately down a crystal fall. When a stolen breath hovers in wait. They both, she and he....knew that what was would always be and that which was not might never be. For, softly their breath mingled and stars caressed the eve ever lightly until the break of dawn’s rise, as the moon cried a lonesome tune....and he longed to see blue eyes that startled his heart and brought the lonesome loon ever closer to the tune of lonesome hearts that ache. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Master poem by a master poet. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your writing is devine in that it is not overdone. You've got a wonderful poetic voice, Magnus~ Just Lovely~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful read, my friend. j. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Barry, so very....one day I hope to hear a loon, maybe even write a poem about it, they seem to sensitive to the emotions of us humans.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
achingly lovely poetry done as always in fine style |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deeply captivating romanticism, dear Barry! Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent! Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
captivating imagery. ;0 |
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