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In Between the In Between
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In Between the In Between |
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Woodsman Junior Member
since 2008-09-03
Posts 25Stony Creek, Va originally...Now Muskoka Ontario |
In between the in between We only have one color No rainbows or bright sunshine here. There is only gray And cold cloudy days Here in between the in between. Here is like there And there is like here In between the in between. The in between is in between The pleasure and the pain All emotion is the same. Love and hate We know not those Here in the in between. You don’t know me I don’t know you In between the in between. Faces don’t even mater Names mean even less Here in the in between. But if you really want to know me If you wish to see my heart I’ll be the one in the shadows Where darkness and light don’t exist I’ll be the one you never see In between the in between. "In Between" by Brian T Brewster now available on Amazon.com and Barnes & Noble |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: in between the in between...there is no twain me like |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
what a very neat read. Well done! Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very interesting write, Brian. Different. I like it. Ida |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
I liked the paradox of this in the final stanza. Very cleverly written. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I wish I could wander in between the in between...Nice write... yann |
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