Open Poetry #43 |
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Bones Bags A Teacher |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Bones has trouble with his fifth grade teacher. She’s always asking questions about his family. “Where’s your father work Billy?” “I don’t have a father.” “Where did your mother and father get married?” “I think they met in jail down in Georgia.” About this time Bones decides to clam up. This woman is asking too many personal questions. “What was your mother doing in Georgia?” Bones doesn’t say a thing. He just sits there. The teacher asks more questions. Bones just sits there. After this went on for a while, the teacher starts to cry. She tells him to go home. Bobby |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sometimes we do get too personal, but it's usually the opposite where the younger children pour their hearts out...looking for validation. Thanks for the read~~ M |
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chopsticks Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888The US, |
Robert, you are a shade tree wordsmith. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear M, Funny how those things stick with a person. I was happy to reduce her to tears. The next year she left teaching at that school. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Chopsticks, I'm pleased if this little poem worked for you. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bob, this is a sad story, I appreciate the attitude of the teacher crying at the end and the courage of Bones enduring such tough and personal questions...Teaching is both so difficult and meaningful... thanks yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I understand the helpless feeling of this teacher. I have felt this way myself in the face of abuse I knew, in my heart, was going on behind the scenes with children I worked with. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Some teachers are good, and some teachers are bad. Let's just say she made a lasting impression on Bones. He never forgot, nor forgave her. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, That teacher left the school, but came back the following year when Bones was in sixth grade, and had a wonderful teacher who believed in him. The sixth grade teacher had Bones bring in one of his mother's flat buttons, and outfit it with a hair pin, so he could dip it in red paint, and use it to make designs on a piece of construction paper. The old fifth grade teacher came by and examined Bones work. She said: "Humph, so you finely found something he can do." Now is that a crappy teacher, or what? Bobby |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
That goes beyond a crappy teacher and I have a great thought of what Bones coulda done with that button! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, What a great idea about what to do with the button. Love Bobby |
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