Open Poetry #43 |
the word not spoken |
nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
The word not spoken goes not quite unheard. It lingers in the eye, in the semi-arch of brow. A gesture of the hand speaks pages more than words, The echo rests in the heart as driftwood does in sand, To be rubbed by time until it rots or shines. The word not spoken touches us as music does the mind. nourzihane |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
Ah yes, a lovely reminder that the best conversations require not a word to be spoken. Nicely written work. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Beautiful! You seem to speak to what I wrote about in my last poem. Love the lines... The echo rests in the heart as driftwood does in sand, You have a new fan |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, sweet nourzihane, what a lovely picture of your charming smile! And wow for this absolutely magical poem you share with us here, it is simply perfect! Love and hugs. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Nourzihane, you are a poetess extraordinaire. There is beauty and wisdom in your lovely poem. Yes, ofttimes the words not spoken speaks louder than those that are uttered. Love & Light, Linda |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite! I think this is my favourite of your poems so far, Nourzhiane. It is amazing that you can express such sensitivity so eloquently in a language that is not your mother tongue. - Owl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nourzihane, Never were truer words so richly spoken by a fledgling artist! Body language is an art all it's own...which is why we have to be so very careful with the written word. Any why emoticons are so very important in today's large web. Wonderful! |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
my friends margherita...sunshine...EarthAngel...Owlsa theAnonDavid...martiniat8 I stand on the beachesof words i ask the emigrant birds about members Are able to express in distinguishing way and i unable to thank them your letter is a kingdom of creativity to us Your presence is beautiful and wonderful the moments derive from it the beauty of meaning and the fragrance of magnificence your pass is shining my humble page thx...thx...thx wonderful pass my respect to you nourzihane |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nourzihane, that was a highly poetic response that you have written for your fellow pipsters! It carries the "fragrance of magnificence"! May your day be a glorious one! Love, EA |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
you write with heart. I really enjoyed reading this. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Dear Earth Angel We've missed your brilliant presence.... your strong pen... your wonderful topics and your distinguishing replys thank you so much god bless you my respect nourzihane |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
sir....Gumpy.... thank you for your wonderful pass my respect nourzihane |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very insightful and also very true. I really enjoyed the "cadence" aspect of this piece and your line breaks along with the punctuation really added to the piece by controlling the speed of the read by natural pauses. Well done. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow! Nourzihane, Excellent write. I don't think I have read you before but I will make sure I do in the future. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write N! ARCTIC WIND |
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