Open Poetry #43 |
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Easel of a writer |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india ![]() |
Easel of a writer Move quill, there are few more paragraphs to create. A patch of lazy ray Has high lightened the leaf. Turquoise blue is his ink. Always a swim in dream…. A few patches of it on a hand whose life-line is a winter-time creek. Withered leaves float, silent. The writer’s trembling grip spills more than he takes in every weary sips of his balmy poison, drinks. An old prescription lies unattended, lonely. This memoir may linger. Unfinished. A yellow bird on the window sill tweets for a while then flies. “I am joining. Don’t go so soon.” Hallucinations grows into the writing, mist on the memoir. {A lazy light has fallen over a piece of paper. Who can say, this may be the history itself? Or the making of it.} clever talks delay friendship! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is tantalisingly enigmatic and its slow images paint so many interesting elements on your canvas, that my eye drinks in eacn detail to the dregs, before moving on to the next and the next and the next. - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Every line a beauty! The above quoted is impressive. Dear Ku, I love reading you and dwell within your beautiful mind's creations. Love, Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ku, I am a lover of poems about poets by poets! lol You have penned a lovely one here. I felt as though I was on the inside of one looking out! Your eyes, heart, and mind are those of a true poet. ![]() ![]() Love & Poet Light, Linda ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I loved this... You are truely an amazing poet! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Magical title here. What a whimsical write, especially liked the yellow bird. Your words linger long after. WIHWT ![]() |
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