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Open Poetry #43
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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india
0 posted 2008-08-31 03:25 AM


Winter

A longing for him.
Her heart sees through frosted panes.
Forever waiting.

Winter-versionII

Her withered hand is
waiting for the touch of him.
To rekindle trust.

clever talks delay friendship!
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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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1 posted 2008-08-31 03:30 AM

This is way beyond exquisite!

- Owl
amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-08-31 03:31 AM

I always love the depth in your pieces...and this one has such incredible imagry.  You bring visions, moments and emotions magically to life.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-08-31 06:28 AM

Yes! How beautiful, dear Ku! Profoundly wise and compassionate.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)
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