Open Poetry #43 |
Uncertainty |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Uncertainty It's 6:00 AM Suzy, no need to get up. I have grown older and you are no pup. What is your hurry?Why not lie abed? We've no pressing duties in this long day ahead. Oh well, if I must I will open the door. You seem so eager to go and explore. You want to know who has invaded your space, as with nose down, you're running all over the place. The mouse who stole food from your dish has been caught, because he did something that he hadn't ought. I only half-heartedly baited the trap. I thought him a brave and quite cheeky young chap. I accept as God's gift this new day that's begun and look for some urgent, small tasks to be done. With our breakfasts over and dishes washed too, you're napping already with nothing to do. While I, as a human, am not made that way. Though arising too early, awake I must stay. For I know that summer is not here to last. I must use or lose it, time's moving too fast. You think you're immortal, I know that I'm not. This life I am living is all that I've got. My life has been happy, I'd live it again, but joys of today are all filtered throuh pain. I envy your living in only the now. I'd like to do that, if I only knew how. The lot of the human is living with fear that as soon as tomorrow she may not be here. By: Joyce 7/12/08 [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (08-30-2008 10:54 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Joyce, you penned your conversation with your dog so well, that I felt I was a peeping Tom and an eavesdropper. Two things that I know with 'certainty' are that you're a sweetheart and a charming poetess! Love you! Linda Lou xo |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Joyce, You're not imortal--who on earth told you that? Just think of the ideas people come up with. This works very well, and the end rhymes are very well done. Bobby |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thank you Linda Lou and Bobby for listening in on my little chat with Susie. It's hard to get a response from her. Love, Joyce |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You express so well the feelings many of us have as we grow older. I have much the same conversation with my cats (who are getting older too) but, like your dog, they don't realize it or worry about it. I just hope I outlive them. (my daughter has five cats of her own). Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very very beautiful, dear Joyce, but oh, trust your pet when you perceive he thinks himself immortal. You are a child of eternity. I strongly believe we shall continue to exist, even after the moment of discarding our earthly form. Enjoyed your poem greatly. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
You have already proved your immortality by leaving such wonderful poems like this to be read over and over again. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Joyce, I loved your poem and all the responses (especially Bobby's and Margherita's). Just sad about the little mousie, though. Please pat and hug Suzie for Auntie Di from sunny South Africa and pass on friendly woofs from Daisy and friendly meeows from Tigger. - Owl |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You think you're immortal, I know that I'm not. This life I am living is all that I've got. My life has been happy, I'd live it again, but joys of today are all filtered throuh pain. I envy your living in only the now. I'd like to do that, if I only knew how. The lot of the human is living with fear that as soon as tomorrow she may not be here. One of your best Joyce, one of your best. Keep up your great writing my dear, it is so much enjoyed. love Lindsay |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
South Africa, UK, Australia, Eternity, and all over America, what a wonderful audience for my simple little poem and how far it has traveled.. Thank You, Joyce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Joyce, This poem is a keeper and will be treasured in my library. Thank you, Alison |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And it still seems to keep going. How amazing. Love you all. Joyce |
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