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Early morning yearnings (4 haiku)
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Early morning yearnings (4 haiku) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Early morning yearnings * Solitude One pair of black socks hang in mocking rain and wind yearning for sun's touch * Environment Seagulls and black crows walk across town streets in rain craving fish and corn * Misery Rain soaked cartons absorb salty tears and sighs clochard craves shelter * Spring turbulence Cherry tree blossoms Targets of rowdy raindrops Yearn for painter's brush * |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
wow! Margherita, loved these... |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
dearet, you are the God of trivial which you have made a creation of your own. your insight has highlightened the God's world. i like the first one best. clever talks delay friendship! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhh, how serenely beautiful....thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how I wish I could see the world through your eyes beautiful piece |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, These are pretty good. Your use of the French word "clochard" was worth the price of admission. Indeed they do. Bobby |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have captured the heart of the raindrop...to blugeon, to dismay...so as to wet the thirsty depths of each display. Smiling at your visions  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita ~ Your "early morning yearnings" made for a very vivid reading experience! The way you displayed these haiku, was very effective in creating a pause between the various scenes and moods. Bravissima, Angel Delight!  With love and Light, Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I enjoyed these, Margharita. Ida |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
good and very lovely. Dear Lady. the Angel Delight!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear pip friends! This morning while driving through the town my eyes caught these views and I told myself "remember socks, seagulls/crows, clochard and cherry tree" and the impressions will unfold again in the mind's eyes, when you can jot them down. And this is the result. I could have developed many more themes ... today I SAW things and they whispered to me. Love, Margherita It is still raining. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
quote:You really should mix Aqua with the Vino, you will be seeing Dolphins in the Trevi fountain next...BTW, nice Haiku, my favorite one was all of them.... J x |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you John! There are so many things I can see here ... with human heart and dolphin's sixth sense!! love Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great Haikus Margherita much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. "Seagulls and black crows walk across town streets in rain craving fish and corn" This is good John . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Lindsay, I enjoyed your visit to my rainy morning impressions! Thank you dear John! A premiere!  Love. Margherita |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, i like the image of the black socks... and i like seeing you again...thank you for the warm wonderful welcome...its so lovely to be remembered xxxxx and you are one of the lovliest people to be remembered by |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Dawn, thank you so much for looking in here and for your loving comment. I did miss you very much! I hope you will stay or at least visit more often. And above all I am looking forward to one of your precious poems! Love and hugs. Margherita   |
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