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Open Poetry #42
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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-03-04 02:55 PM

Disturbed thoughts surrounding my head.
Thinking about what I have just read.
The hammer of truth smashes my foot.
The pain opens my eyes to the bitter reality.
As I saw the pages one by one.
Every turn was as hard as diamonds.
As the pages all said;
''I want a new brother''.
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LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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1 posted 2008-03-04 07:15 PM

sadness. sad.
ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
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2 posted 2008-03-04 07:16 PM

That is so good. I hope that you can resolve whatever happened with you and your brother.
Good luck.
xTr3m3sT
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3 posted 2008-03-04 07:30 PM

Well it wasn't my brother it was my little sister...She has a notebook and I happened to look at it and when I did it said I want a new brother on every page
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