Open Poetry #42 |
cocajoes sugerary |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
downtown from remember across the lover's blvd on the other side of maybe where it was ok to want to I left your eyes there on that glass table top under the wishing tree looking up for a god toy while I ran back to nowhere to pick up some excuses why day dreams always end but you smiled just before and made me leave my keys behind just by accident in your hands so I returned with no reasons in a bag of see thru plastic that you pushed behind your lovely __________ daark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
leaving with a smile... all of your excerpts taste like a lick |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serene...a savoring perhaps...thanks lady friend |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmmmmmmmm..........yes Mr Daark love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, I read this title before my eyes were fully open and I read it to be "cajones surgury" - no lie. I like your title so much better ... and the rest? Well, I am lickin' ... No, I meant liking. Yes, I am liking it lots. A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b thank you ms for the read and smile ___________ ms ali...thanks babe for opening the other eye and reading it again..lol ______________ friend artic, thank you so much |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
google search for your title asked : did you mean "cocajoe's surgery?" ... any first read always leaves me confused after the second read something dawns in my mind and the third read brings magic into view you are quite unique, dear D! love Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I agree with you Margherita.. our Mr Daark is very unique! I just came back to tag this one, it is lovely to the eyes! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...no, sugerary..kind of a cajun term for sweet stuff place..anything you have a cravin for, is inside those walls..thanks lady friend ___________ Ms r & b....looks like the lady has a sweet tooth, thanks again ms |
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