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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I never remember what all we mentioned my mind was other places that you brought along secretly in those jeans and that smile but I did see our mouths moving and heard sounds beyond just the ocean and we introduced a kiss or two something in passing that stayed they say rincon has memories of every lover that she knew I go there often and ask her questions she just smile her tides usually sometimes she lets me look deeper and I taste those suggestions of yours that left hand prints on my shirt but rincon says you stained my heart ______________ daark |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
This conjures stunning romance and yet aching melancholy. Beautifully written. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
but rincon says you stained my heart You should be careful, dear D., with such conclusions ... not all might have at hand the salts to revive them! Sigh! love Margherita  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"sometimes she lets me look deeper and I taste those suggestions of yours that left hand prints on my shirt" I suppose that sometimes would be better than no times....  |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
very romantic. Are you sure that you heart was stained but not stolen? Enjoyed your beautiful poem. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
this is aching well with what had to be good memories for all of the stains |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles at you Mr Daark... what lovely words here... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Perhaps it is not a stain at all but a tattoo forever linked to the beating of the heart it touches. Maybe. A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
it's the open wound, efficient reminder of hearts drifting at sea. Sounds like an achingly lovely day at the beach... Indigo |
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firestorm Member
since 2008-02-26
Posts 109 |
to know as she knows & I agree a tattoo. This piece makes me want to sit on the beach..enough said |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pipfriendlys...I will just say thanks to each of you ..you are all wonderful |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Felt a pressing need to revisit this one... Yep, still there. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi....yes, it is still there..thanks babe |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is the wonder of reading...not only do you leave me with a wonderful dreamy romantic taste...but i learn at the same time!....i saw photos of rincon...a place i would never have found without your little piece of paradise in ink...thank you for the travels |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms muted...my pleasure to be a humble tour guide..thank you much |
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