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Call of Nature |
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RedNail Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 65Stockholm, Sweden |
Call of Nature Branches split Raindrops fall I'm happy even though it might seem wrong Thunder roll as the wind scream "Get a hold of yourself, fear not me" Dance with the moon Sing with a sea Forget your worries Be with me Salt in the wind Nature call Branches split Raindrops fall Look at the sky See the glory Stay on the ground Fear not my fury Feel no fear Come along Dance with me Be a storm ------------------------------ I know this poem is a little bit weird but I've always loved to be outside whenever there's a storm and I just wanted to express that feeling of total security. ^^
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fantastic write! And welcome to Pip, dear RedNail! I totally immerse in your words, I feel them and I can relate. love Margherita  |
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firestorm Member
since 2008-02-26
Posts 109 |
I also love storms-especially being on the beach in one-I like your work |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
It's not weird at all, I enjoyed it & welcome.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
RedNail ~ "Hi", to you over there in Sweden! I love a good thunderstorm! It cleanses the air of impurities and it is revitalizing! If your poem is "weird", then I am as well! ~ I loved it!  You captured the essence and energy of a storm, perfectly! Giving you a warm, welcoming, pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love storms too and I think your poem shows the love you feel for them. A |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm that way too...how else could I survive in Florida? good poem! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP AGAIN! lol ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write!' I am especially fond of: "Dance with the moon Sing with a sea Forget your worries Be with me... Feel no fear Come along Dance with me Be a storm(!)" applause! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
If it is weird, count me in! I love this, and feel much of my strength comes from the creation of nature. Wonderful writing with a great message! miscellanea |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Welcome to PIP Rednail, you will love it here And I enjoyed you great poem. Lindsay |
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