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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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you leave love words on my mornings that smile my inner sides with satisfaction in a way that is not quite proper for a proper girl with manners and from ten times one thousand miles they carry their dulcet tones with ever changing hues that brighten my day and warm my heart I think the wonderful of you is simply wonderful… Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine romantic writing...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James.. thank you ... I think though, you are the fine romantic writer here on these pages blue...  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And this is truly wonderful too! |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
this poem has painted the feeling with flair. wonderful lines like: "that smile my inner sides with satisfaction"- echoes in my ears clever talks delay friendship! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Helen and Poddarku... thank you both for your lovely comments on my work... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
quote: Dear RDB, what wonderful composition, I especially like the line above, that sums up how I feel when I visit this place. Thanks for sharing John x Ps, Thanks also for the e mail, I'll reply later........ |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Did very much enjoy this Roniece, does this bare a nod to Elvis? The title had me thinking that straight away... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you John.... and you make me smile tooo.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thanks Simon... no, not Elvis I'm afraid, but I do like his music! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b, it is a treat to see this side of you slip in and out of the horizon, please continue |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah, dear Roniece, love knows no distance and you are the living proof of this truth. You say it lovingly and with your usual charm. love Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I think the wonderful of you is simply wonderful…", dear Roneice!!!  With love, Linda |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful loving sentiments expressed Hope |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, I think this long distance love poem works so very well. Bobby |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully written! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lovely write... very expressive. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
"you leave love words on my mornings" Oh, Roniece, this is beautiful. It's a wonderful line that simply captured me. I really like this poem but I fell in love with that one line. A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is wonderful RDB! ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my! such wonderful comments you all have left for me on my morning.. thank you so very much Mr Daark, Margherita, Lindalou, Hope, Bobby, Dixie, TD, Ali-girl, and Michael you have all made my day ever so brighter! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A proper girl indeed, I'm sure you wouldn't do anything that wasn't proper Roniece and you brighten everyone's day. Great write. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah yes, a good proper girl never tells all ! thanks Lindsay for the smile you have left me with love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
If there is anything wonderful where you are concerned Roniece it is your heart...and your poetry..what a pleasure it is to know that i am on the same planet as you? Let alone have the unique pleasure to converse with you..i thank you for that..for your poetry and for being uniquely YOU..thank you.. Goldenrose. This world is fading away, along with everything it craves. But if you do the will of God, you will live forever... 1 John 2:17 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write!' I am especially fond of: "words... from ten times one thousand miles ...carry their dulcet tones with ever changing hues that brighten my day and warm my heart" applause! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, this is stunning, very much enjoyed your joy in this one, came through loud and clear, was romantic, sensual and full of life, very well done my friend, thank you for sharing this. Rick |
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