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PrestonThePoet Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 87 |
Debt Burning pockets to cinders, Never leaving our thoughts; Scraping away skin. Consuming, never releasing; In wait; Thirsting for re-payment; Foreshadowing your downfall; Into pools of deep red, Swirling around you ever faster, Cyclonic tides pull you deeper. Until you re-surface, In a sea of wine. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very good, Preston!! It is a dangerous situation that brings nightmares, no doubt. This poem should be included in all those offers of easy loans we receive, so that everyone would be more careful in spending, but this wouldn't be in the interest of financial intermediaries!!! Good job! love Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the "D" word! Bad debt can lead to disaster! It's a disease that can eat away at one's spirit and peace of mind. You seem to have captured the essence of what that would be like. Easy credit makes it easy to slip into such a state! Perhaps there truly is a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow! Here's hoping that this spring has lots of showers!  Linda |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Good poem for these economic times. Kind of a scarey time we are in. Alison |
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