Open Poetry #42 |
the bird |
poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
The bird A bird sat on the windowsill And saw, We are running after metals and papers. A bird never understood. It flew to eat a nice juicy maggot. clever talks delay friendship! |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Beautiful and philosophical A bird A bird sat on the branch with tiny buds And saw, We are running after inks and thought A bird never understood. It flew away, chirping. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Poddar, this is very nice and so profound in its content, in just a few words. We have lost many of the naturally built in abilities to live in harmony with All there is. The bird still knows. Beautiful! love Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I spend a lot of time bird-watching, and they really do stick to basics. An enjoyable, thoughtful write. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I LOVE bird watching!-- Its so fun, seeing all the different types of birds and you are also relaxing and breathing in mother natures sweet air and watching as her creations grow for the up-coming rebirth of your world season of Spring! Thank you for this, Makes me want to go to a forest (in the spring though!, TOO cold lol) and watch the birds as they make nest, and fly around, oh, and watching how many different birds there can be! I would love to read more! ARCTIC WIND |
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