Open Poetry #42 |
Love or Lust |
sephiroth New Member
since 2008-02-23
Posts 4 |
A love so secret, veiled and dark hidden deep within my heart yet i think i may be wrong about my heart, my love, my song Is it naught but lustful yearning, a base desire my heart is learning is it love or is it lust to find the truth i think i must search my black and tattered soul and make the truth my one true goal until at last my colours show but, i guess till then i'll never know |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Sephiroth, I’d advise using Standard English Language capitalization and punctuation. “Essentials of English” by Hopper, Gale, Foote, and Griffith is good and not expensive. You might be able to pick it up at a library. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (02-28-2008 05:17 PM).] |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
love the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If you spend lots of time thinking about sex, its lust...if you spend lots of time in appreciation, caring, acceptance, concern, these are fruits of love...lust is right there in a moment, love needs time to grow...just thoughts...James |
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