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Writing recovery |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Like rain it comes without thought or trepidation the trapeze to contortionist the cycle of clown parades that burst from the sky silo like rain it comes the drizzle before and between from behind the dark chambers suffocated by thinking the terse of the verse given pause, then reliquished to dormancy. suddenly storming upon this morning, like rain it comes. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-29-2008 10:44 PM).] |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
the best thing about rain is its smell. i really enjoyed this poem. specially: to the contortioniest the cycle of clown parades that burst from the sky silo clever talks delay friendship! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The lyrics "Let it rain, let it rain, let it rain...", came to mind as I read your "Writing recovery". Warm hug, Linda  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
and it came like rain and tailed with rainbow.  beautiful. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And here I stand under the shower of your dazzling raindrops. You are always top!! love Margherita |
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savior Junior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 10 |
this is beautiful |
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