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Almost Spring
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Almost Spring |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Almost Spring The closer come the warmer days, the farther you have traveled Snow shaken from the limbs it weighs, as winter's grip unraveled As time reflects its relevance in every melted drop And every seed awakens then, perennial the crop The weather changes randomly, from blustered breath to tear Emotions stored among the clouds grow greater through the year Each leaf unfurls palm up to catch the sunshine as it comes Before we know it, flowers bud, each follow different drums The looking forward keeps good time while miracles are made Condensed of all the laughter stored, then suddenly displayed Along the path walked heart and soul, most reverent shall be The greatest gift, with all my heart, most faithfully to see Copyright Kkh 2/26/08 |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"Along the path walked heart and soul" . . . a beautiful stroll with you, indeed! Beautiful spring poetry! Hugs, Robert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do love Spring! you've captured it beautifully! |
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MJ Member
since 2008-02-21
Posts 60 |
"The looking forward keeps good time while miracles are made Condensed of all the laughter stored, then suddenly displayed" Loved this. I feel like I hold my breath during the depths of winter, and let it free in the spring. You really did capture this! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a marvelous journey...espeically this... The weather changes randomly, from blustered breath to tear Emotions stored among the clouds grow greater through the year |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Each leaf unfurls palm up to catch the sunshine as it comes ****************** wondeful words, in particular that image of little leaf kind of parallel to the beauty and innocense, faith in the world that catches her/him we see in that same palm of the newborn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You made me see and hear Nature's whispers and splendor. Exquisite work, dear TD. love Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I love the Springtime, when everything starts to bloom. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I am not going to bother highlighting the whole poem!, Its Sooo Goooood! ARCTIC WIND |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
TD, talk about hiding your light under a bushel! This must have been hibernating & I am so glad the warm spring sun made it blossom so eloquently...immensely enjoyed John |
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