Open Poetry #42 |
Listening |
Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
my eyes they burn with what they've seen, my ears they hurt from trying to hear, things are rarely "what could've been", maybe because "seeing isn't always believing" and "hearing isn't listening" How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem made me think ~ really think! ~ and I like that! I read it 4 times! I guess seeing isn't necessarily believing! lol Great ponderer of a write! EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Only one mouth..two ears...listen twice as much as you speak.....if you want to see your dreams come true..don't sleep.....hearing is not listening....ask any husband's wife... |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Thank you all for your replies. very much How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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