Open Poetry #42 |
In The Willows Tonight |
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
In The Willows Tonight The wind through the willows whispers tonight In a soft complement to the tawny moonlight. Two headstones, two graves, each laid side by side; He once was her groom and she was his bride. A hoot-owl sings solo, his passionate song Echoes each night until long after dawn. The carpet of grass laid upon every tomb Becomes their own dance floor - where love is in bloom. For here in the darkness, beneath starry skies, In the still of this graveyard are heard the soft sighs As two ghostly shadows rise and then merge And I watch in amazement as two forms converge. Though I’ve stood in this spot, now, many a time It still renders me speechless, the beauty sublime, And I’ve no explanation - all logic fails me - There is no justifying this vision I see. I stand there dumbfounded, a blubbering fool, With tears in my eyes that I can not control And I marvel the power of unbridled love That poets and sages have often spoke of. Then I glance at the headstones - my mom and my dad - Recalling the wondrous love that they had And how on dad’s deathbed, with his final breath, He swore that his love could, indeed, conquer death. I watch as they sway for one short, final while; Then turn away slowly and knowingly smile - They’ll dance until daybreak, then fade with first light, And they’ll waltz with the wind in the willows tonight. I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (01-29-2008 06:18 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, I have shivers down my spine, dear Ruth. This is truly an exquisite poem, with visions induced by love. Wonderful! Brava! love Margherita |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
truly beautiful poem told a story of three three volume novel. Beautiful. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a beautiful tribute to your parents, Ruth and how very lucky they were. They left you wonderful memories. Ida |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a vision Ruth! A beautifully crafted poem set the stage for the most beautiful scene. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I don't know what to say. I keep 'erasing' my responses. I am simply at a loss - thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem. Alison |
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