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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-02-25 12:25 PM

It's just like a dream
It is just like a song,
It is just like a love,
It is just like a long way,
It's just like a summer day,
Today,
The sun has come out,
Now I am happy and ready to see you
Standing here with me,
It just like a star,
Just shinning upon the night,
It just like a right time,
Right time to enjoy this summer
IT is just like a story of love,
Now you can see where I am standing?
You can see through my eyes,
It is just like a dream
that came true,
I never thoght,
This day will come ,
And I think this is love grows evryday,
It is just like a dream
It just like a song to me,
Every word I sing
And when I hear every door bell ring,
To my heart,
It is like a dream came true,
It is just like.....

[This message has been edited by vandana (02-27-2008 06:38 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2008-02-25 02:08 PM

nice

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-02-25 02:12 PM

beautiful. It is just like life itself

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-02-25 04:56 PM

Enjoyed...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-26 05:28 PM

Enjoyed!

ARCTIC WIND

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2008-02-26 07:18 PM

A beautiful love song, Vandana.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2008-02-26 07:53 PM

Oh Vandana I can hear the happiness in your words, it is a wonderful state to be in.

I hope the sun shines on you always.
A big warm hug to you dear lady. Take care.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2008-02-26 08:52 PM

wonderful gifting here Vandana

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2008-02-26 09:48 PM

Vandana,

There is a good story here.

However, be careful of contractions.

It can be "I am" or it can be "I'm", however "Iam" doesn't work, it's not a word.

Bobby

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

9 posted 2008-02-26 10:55 PM

. . . a lovely poem!

Hugs, Robert

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2008-03-01 10:02 PM

vandana,

I love the songs that you sing in your poetry.

Alison

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

11 posted 2008-03-02 02:09 PM

Dreams..wishes made by the head that the heart longs to come true..much enjoyed Vandana

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