Open Poetry #42 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. A long white scarf On withered grasses Wet gray mist The morning road In the mirror Of my heart I see only you Melting snow . . . From wooden eaves . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful. Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine images! I am most fond of: "In the mirror Of my heart I see only you" Applause! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ This is a soft and lovely shade of ink from you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Winter love frozen heart crying solid tears |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"In the mirror of my heart." Beautiful. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
In the mirror Of my heart I see only you Melting snow . . . From wooden eaves John, a lovely gifting here... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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