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Deep Within.....I Am { Poet Challenge}
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Deep Within.....I Am { Poet Challenge} |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Deep Within, I Am.... I am here among you, lost in silent and soft remember of passing moments, of traveling times yet to be before my eyes. I am there, standing in the shadow of a great oak, watching the crispness of a sun in morning rise. I am beating within your pulsing chest, as blood mightily courses your every vein. Lost in temperate moments, in unrest...of daily struggles which I must restrain. I am within your feathered pen as ink flows dark upon a fresh clean page. Waiting to speak, to take a snow drift walk...to have a moment's engage. I am where the budding flowers bloom, where daisies and daffodils play. The unseen flowing breeze that touches your room, the shadow lingering, wanting simply to just stay. I am ... yes... I am.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, you certainly do get around, Poet!  ~ and beautifully so! It shows in every poem that you gift us with! Love & Poet Light, Linda  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done Mag... Well done!  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Nice write Magnus, very expressive. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I am where the budding flowers bloom, where daisies and daffodils play. The unseen flowing breeze that touches your room, the shadow lingering, wanting simply to just stay. beautiful!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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