Open Poetry #42 |
The Chill Runs Deep (Blast from the Past) |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very profound, my dear lady!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, so interesting ... I just got an email back from a friend who wrote - "Wow! That could be a tribute to Drew Peterson!!! (and Scott Peterson too!)" I hadn't thought of that .... but makes sense, now doesn't it? Thanks, Bao~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Marge Tindal- Chilly write! lol I am soo cold now because I read this lovely poem! Hot coco, here i come.. ARCTIC WIND |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent!!! Eric |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Absolutely beautiful, Marge! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Words of wisdom give this chilling beauty a point to ponder. Thanks for sharing this truth with us, Marge. God bless, Rae |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Doesn't sound like warm natured you. What could it mean? Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This give me chills just looking at the berg! It's incredible so much lies unseen............usually anyhow.........beneath the sea. The poetry is luminous! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow, Marge, haven't seen this side of you. poets are so complicated. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marge, this is profound in more than one sense! The picture already transmits chill though through beauty, but the words enhance the feeling. Anger is a killer, this is a tremendous truth. It is important that we transform this killer into inner peace, otherwise it "eats" us. But you say it is a blast from the past, so I don't worry. Tremendous impact! Extremely well done, dear Marge. love and warm hugs Margherita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
So glad to have been able to share this with new friends~ I had actually written this years and years ago~ Someone had sent me that graphic of an iceberg ... it just 'spoke' to my ink~ The 'blast from the past' really simply means that I "reposted" it~ A new acquaintance sent it to me the other day and it reminded me of the fact that I had written one .... I decided to "re-up" it~ I think that it does speak to the fact that there are many out there that show only one face to the world, while underneath the surface they harbor chilling thoughts that are not productive and are often very destructive~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Quite chilling Marge |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Brrr *shiver* I dont like the cold. But wait whats that I see AHHH more snow!!!! LOL *Quickly Zach go get something warm to drink Oh i know Hot coco!!!! LOL* nice write ~Zach~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Marge, I saved this one to my library. It is amazing. I am a bit speechless and overwhelmed. Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Marge, I don't know how I missed this one. It very nice. Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You have done it again Marge, a wonderful expressive poem. I just loved it. Lindsay |
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