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writhe of la gata
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writhe of la gata |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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and now on this gypsy morrow where the dawn of morning is sleeveless nude as gauze over a yawning window's eye I wonder of the gata's waking writhe how does she prowl her purgatory passion how does she bristle her fur to glisten and nudge the wanting waiting of doorways as she prances her dancing to those moments when mindless of the skin of woman she pines not for the embracing lathering of leather or the momentary memories of her males but for some solstice in samba solution on her island of snow signs reading whispers ________________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful writing Mr Daark.. as always! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b, thank you |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I will admit (no malice intended) that I did not understand. But I do love your phrases. They created wonderful images for me. Dee |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
but for some solstice in samba solution You do come up with some stunning POETIC images! I love it! love Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feeling the whispers between the screams fades the sudden silence of her voiceless morning without |
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Fareed Member
since 2008-02-08
Posts 75 |
Loved it to the core, thanks for sharing. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Dark Stranger, Be careful of that shark. She's got teeth,too, and she can bite. This is a cool poem. Bobby |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Dee, thank you for looking in. ____________ ms mar, thank you for your eyes lady friend _______________ ms inky, always you smile me as you read ______________ friend fareed, thank you for the read ______________ friend bobby, the cat keeps me from the sharks, thanks for the read sir |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I think that we don't always have to understand the words to understand the passion of a poem. Sometimes reading poetry reminds me of listening to opera. I feel myself soaring beyond the spoken word, carried by the passion of the moment. There are times, D, when I feel this with your poetry. The words flow, the passion is there and I ride along with the feeling I get. Thank you for the momentary aria. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, the feeling is the poetry is it not little one? your read me well that way, thanks babe |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
always good. Love the ending. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
and now on this gypsy morrow where the dawn of morning is sleeveless nude as gauze over a yawning window's eye.." Enjoyed the poem dark stranger.. ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dark Stranger, Oops, my error, you're talking Spanish. I thought you meant a Gata Shark. Their mating habits are somewhat interesting. Like I said, I like it a lot. Bobby |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this is so tight, so smooth, and positively lovely babe. I adore reading you yanno. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Friend TomMark, thank you sir for the read ________________ a & w, thank you chilly one for the eyes and comments _______________ bobby J, thanks guy..appreciate it _________________ ms gs, thank you babe for the eyes |
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