Open Poetry #42 |
Sandy Beach Dreams |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sandy Beach Dreams Walking onto the beach he would have minded his own business if those Australian girls didn't look so fine, so when the girl in the string bikini tripped him he fell right into the arms of the one he had in mind. Daytime conversations took them into a pleasurable direction, and their tanned bodies found themselves in embrace as they went into the night. And the smiles upon their faces shined brightly in the soft glow of moonlight. JamesLee 23February 2008 Inspired by Roniece's "Boulevard of Dreams". |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles....!! ooh my !! you were inspired by one of my poems sweet James? How lovely is that! I love this - your words are wonderful and vivid!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, Oh yeah! I like this loads. Been there, done that. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yep, that was a great source of inspiration. Very lovely, James! love Margherita |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
i am imagining hmmm...how is it ! this is a good one. clever talks delay friendship! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I live near a beautiful Aussie beach James , but have not wore a string bikini for a few years LOL Hope |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Walking onto the beach.." I love Beaches! ARCTIC WIND |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
"Daytime conversations took them into a pleasurable direction, and their tanned bodies found themselves in embrace as they went into the night. And the smiles upon their faces shined brightly in the soft glow of moonlight." I can just imagion of what that means or what comes next LOL!!!! God ,you sure do have a way with words LOL!!! great poem anyway. ~Zach~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Roniece, Robert, Margherita, poddarku, hope, Artic Wind, and Falling rain for the wonderful responses... Especially you Roniece for the inspiration...your poem "Boulevard of Dreams" resonated with me and drew me in...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A dream vacation for any man! Now, if it was only that easy at beaches back home! Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Very Nice, JamesM. I'm ready for summer and a visit to a beach! M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Earth Angel and nakdthoughts for the wonderful responses...almost every day is a good beach day over here...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
How lucky can you be. great wright James Much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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