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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Vanishings wavering sunset and empty mountain-forest bright-swift stream and deep blue current man’s ‘grand’ intents and purposes vanishing all… none can suppress the evening mist and time ---b. e. adams [2/22/08] [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (02-22-2008 09:25 PM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
wavering sunset and empty mountain-forest...." You create such lovely images in your post! Very lovely writing here, Thanks for the wonderful imagery!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, I really like your last strophe. It’s well said, and true. Time is one of the four constants that can’t be messed with. “none can suppress the evening mist and time” Bobby |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
How true. A hopeless truth in such a beautiful poem. sadder. have a wonderful weekend, dear Bruce.  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, and I love how nature can so easily reclaim what man has thought he owned. A |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Agreeing with all the above replies, this is a fine write, greatly enjoyed. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So very true, Bruce and to think there are those who think they have power and control. Time is laughing. Ida |
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