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Some Memories Are Blurred By Tears, Others By Years
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Some Memories Are Blurred By Tears, Others By Years |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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Granted I miss you. But some things were never meant to be- I am a poet and you are married and you were always there for me until just recently. A beauty in my youth, everyone could see the handsome, powerful man with the gorgeous mistress of me but those days are gone with days that changed us each, and put those fond memories of old times out of reach. We were beautiful. Yes. But between tears and years I find that the memory of us simply blurs and disappears. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"But between tears and years I find that the memory of us simply blurs and disappears."  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Very poignant, you have a way with these Dixie, beautifully summed up... John |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 There's that mirror again Dix... Your words always touch. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Passing shadows, This is a very nice tribute. Being beautiful can be a hard job. Bobby |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well done. |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
So poignant and I love your rhyming titles Loved it... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Beautifuly wrote!! ~Zach~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Still a touching and heartfelt write my friend Hope |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Touching! ARCTIC WIND |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the ending stanza. Very nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love this Dixie especially the last couple of lines. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
especially powerful ending! applause! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! Thanks everyone! Great comments! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
So many times, in the pages of blue, we read our story in someone else's words. I love that about this place. Very touching, beautiful write. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You are still beautiful Dixie as was your poem. loved it. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We were beautiful. Yes. But between tears and years I find that the memory of us simply blurs and disappears. Powerful, Dixie! But dear Lindsay is right, you are still very beautiful!! And there will be another handsome man to make you happy once again. love Margherita  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
wow, simply wonderful!!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dixie, I think that there is something really special about a woman who can admit her beauty, speak of it and draw others in to the fact that it exists - but is not all of her. You do that to me. Yes, you are a beautiful poet (smiles). Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
agree with Ali... you are a beautiful poet sweet Dixie girl..  loved this... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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