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Tree Whispers |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tree Whispers ~*Marge Tindal*~ In memoried corners of childhood meadows we pause momentarily to hear the sighs of tree whispers from the past calling us to realize that we were we still are alive~ ***For Karen, she knows the why*** ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful write, bringing back many memories.  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Marge Simply put, deeply felt Much enjoyed John |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Though tree whispers quiet with time, we are secure in the memories of childhood games and secrets. As usual, you brought a smile to my face Dee  Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this sure makes me miss the giants of "home" very much enjoyed this |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Oh how much I loved this! I wish I could hear the whispers more often from the trees in my woods! ooxx, Marti |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I really Enjoyed the poem Marge! Beautifully written! ARCTIC WIND |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And the wind cried..."Karen"???  giggling my thank you, Marge.  (I really think my next adoptee will be named "Wilmer"--for my Dad.) beaming achoo--what a lovely surprise, 'cause no, I didn't know you would! *laughing again* |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a 'write' finely shaped in so many ways! applause! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Beautiful verse Marge, enjoyed so much. Lindsay |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful always, my dear lady. Have a wonderful weekend!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved this, Marge. Inspired, I think! *hugs*.....jo |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Marge Tindal, This is well crafted work. I like it. It makes me smile. Bobby |
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Fareed Member
since 2008-02-08
Posts 75 |
Oh I read it in reverse and it still is amazing. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely, Marge. Simply lovely. A |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thankee everyone~ Ya' see ... Karen and I had a 'conversation', and in spite of what she says,"what a lovely surprise, 'cause no, I didn't know you would!" ... yes she did !!! LOL ... now don't go contradicting me young lady !!! Give me a thought and you know me well enough by now to KNOW I'm gonna run with it~ Get up and go plant a tree named 'Wilmer'~  *Huglets*  ~*MargeOfTheWhispers*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...nice...nice...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This brings joy, the words are beautiful and the intention to plant a tree with a certain name is a fantastic idea. love and hugs Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A real touch of brilliance with this one Marge, it was so much enjoyed, love to you dear lady. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Marge this is oh so lovely! love RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhhh, how I love your tree whispers...enchantingly beautiful |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
Good poem. The line divisions are perfect and add a layered effect to the poem. Thanks for posting it. regards, shirtless poetry podcasts, blogs and[ photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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