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cathedral on indio lane |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were always playful there in your funny shoe woman skin pretending you didn't have any more of those vulnerable things to wear but that you might go shopping if I wouldn't mind driving you there and helping you try things on in the privacy of the public courtyard when the worshipers were outdoors pretending to be pigeons picking at shadows at arm's length then flying to wanting more places up high on their statue's minds ________________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
pigeons and statues, reminds me of a day in the park. Enjoyed your thoughts here, D. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you were always playful there in your funny shoe woman skin" makes me wonder what her skin looks like... and makes me think she laughs a lot...  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Always a pleasure Dark ! ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe _______________ ms suesea, her skin is lovely..shimmers when wet..and I suspect she loves the rain, thanks hon _________________ a&w, thank you for the read and reply |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
worshipers pretending to be pigeons. I like that scene, I could see it, see them poking around the courtyard. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nan, thank you for the read and reply |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You must be on a sight-seeing tour with a goddess! A word delight! love Margherita  |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
where the disrobing of inhibitions give rise to thoughts that take wing. Sounds like a lovely place to meditate... Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you babe ________________ ms indi...would you mind stepping closer than an arm's length? thank you hon |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Mmmmmm... so would that be something akin to a meeting of the minds? ;-) Indigo |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmmm... shopping with you Mr Daark would be a pleasure! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, sometimes your poetry reads like the most intimate whispers. Like soft air touching each word as I read them. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi, minds? sure, we can start there.. _____________ ms ali-san, I enjoy your eyes on my word ends, how they leave little shimmers, thanks babe |
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