Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
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2008-02-21
10:26 PM
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Girl says: "I'll always wait for you my dear.. Along the moonlight I will wait Without you I fear the clutches of your Fate" The Sailors voice echo's in her head
Sailor says: "I'm lost at sea Im sorry my dear We will never be What has happen i have fear... My soul is lost and never coming back I long to be with you But my body is what lacks I want to be with you, really i do"
The girl looks out to the sea to notice the ship
Girl says: "I'll do whatever it takes I'll sell thy soul for a price well fed Oh for Christ's sake! Please take me instead!
Sailor says: "Please my love this will never be My soul is lost, as you can see You cannot come to rescue me Ah my darling, my soul is not free Its trapped on this ship Among thee crew My heart is now ripped This is my burden...If only you knew"
The ship crashes among the waves in the pale moonlight
Girl says: "But I will forever miss you and all the time we've had. What i'd give to give you one last kiss Forever i will be sad"
Salior says: "Don't miss me my dear I'll forever remember you I do not fear Please dont forget me for i will not you" The last words of the salilor echo in her head.
Girl Cries out: "No! please no! Dont leave me!
The girl runs down from the rocks down to the beach. Wadeing in the waves, her tears begain to over flow The ship begains to sail into the distance. While the waves crash among the shore a faint voice in the distance cry out.
"I'll never forget you... I love you...."
Then the ship is gone never to be seen again. The girl left in the pale moonlight with tearsdrops falling to the sea.
------------------------------------------- This poem was supposed to be told like a story. Hope you like it!
~Zach~
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Zach Booker-Scott
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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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2008-02-23
12:43 PM
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Zach,
This is a nice story. Do try and remember to always capitalize you first person singular pronoun "I".
Bobby
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simon
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since 2008-01-14
Posts 440
London, England
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2008-02-23
07:04 AM
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Enjoyed...
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