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Lunar eclipse |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
she wondered some days why the ocean of her was pulled in undertow abandon how some days the salt of him could scrape fresh words on her skin and how some day the dark of the moon would release the gravity of her soul. Indigo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wasn't it just so beautiful, I loved watching it, Very cool how this world and outer space works! -- With that being said GREAT WRITE! ARCTIC WIND  |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
last night i watched a lunar eclipse. it was amazing and your poem discribed it perfectly. great job!! ~Zach~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Excellent poem!! It's good to have you sharing again. love Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indy, she is lovely there on the lips of that cove...teasing the sipping with her tides..enjoyed this one ms |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Artic- I'm always amazed to think that these celestial events have been fascinating mankind for thousands of years. Zach- Pleased the experience left you wanting more. M- Thanks for your warm welcome at my return. So glad you enjoyed. DS- Appreciate your eyes on my cove. *grin* Indigo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An beautiful and highly intriguing lunar penning.  I too, watch the full lunar eclipse. I enjoy observing celestial events. I am awed by them! Love & Lunar Light, EA  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Indigo, Simply lovely. One could just drown in the words. Alison |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Beautiful! Rae |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
EA- Lunar light, so cool, so mysterious. Thanks for feeling it. :-) Dear Alison- What kind words. Thank you for taking time to share them here. Rae- So happy to elicit your reaction! My pleasure. Indigo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I happened by this and noticed the title. It was an amazing sight. Your poetry does it justice! Great job. A keeper! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
M- Thanks so much for the visit and the keepsake. :-) Indigo |
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