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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-02-21 08:42 PM

Winter’s Midnight Light
Silently, absorbed in the mirror of the snow
My breath curls reluctantly into the crisp night air
Such reverence bestowed upon a sleeping earth
Calm as no other, overturns the barter of a busy day
Quelling time’s thirsty speed, rocked gently to the songs of aurora

Wings folded, puffed upon hidden branches
Attuned to their wake up calls, I know these secret places
Strangely quieted, beneath the stroke of whispering stillness
Most times, I too would sleep through the hour
Summoned I suppose, for my own lullaby and good night

My mind makes journey, whispering percussion
Wishing you this peaceful place, by heart to heart discussion
Reflection of the passing on of ribbon colored sighs
Speaking into prayerful hush, my thoughts to His ear
Winter’s midnight light astounds me, every single tear

Copyright kkh 2/19/08

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2008-02-21 08:54 PM

Beautiful! YEP, it is.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2008-02-21 09:02 PM

I am quite fond of lines and images such as:

“breath curl(ing) reluctantly into the crisp night air”;

“songs of aurora”;

“Calm…overturn(ing) the barter of a busy day”;

“wake up calls…(of) secret places”;

That “stroke of whispering stillness” and “Winter’s midnight light”

Applause!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-02-21 10:26 PM

Winter’s Midnight Light
Silently, absorbed in the mirror of the snow
My breath curls reluctantly into the crisp night air
Such reverence bestowed upon a sleeping earth
Calm as no other, overturns the barter of a busy day
Quelling time’s thirsty speed, rocked gently to the songs of aurora.............."

This is So beautifully Penned TD!-- I love this piece and every part about it. You Write such lovely poems!

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-02-22 04:05 AM

Fine writing...James

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-02-22 05:26 AM

TD

"My mind makes journey, whispering percussion...."

keeping tempo with my heart & the perfect flow from beginning to end of this little gem....

I do so much enjoy your writing,

Thanks

John

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