Open Poetry #42 |
Ron's Oceanic Blue Eyes |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Stuffing voice into my ears constellations of your azure eyes came knocking at my door you tipped my wonder off balance with flashes that could blind a deer you were that someone behind pushing me skewing off balance I’m underwater In your ocean where I breathe means scent of stay-at-home skies herbs 4 life you've given so many your smile your light found it’s home on my face & the faces of many others your that erotic out-of-body experience answering spiritual questions your words guided so man since we were kids friendship tells the tale of a woman pulling me right past destiny where time goes back to find sustenance you sprinkled dreams within my soul where fiery passion paints a whole new meaning you gave me that meaning sometimes a girl just needs to believe her heart lives deep in a far off time where some symphony strings her deepest most inner essence where men and women become one...no longer seperate but true souls of mankind friendship is where poetry turns into metaphysics that otherwise, might merge into secrets of joy, nature and there, in one surprise of afternoon you...you meet me in sun rise prayer gazing earnestly into my eyes where we become a river of sighs a river of man since we were children a friendship beyond what most have known respect, adoration and mid summer dreams which reflect time spent well thank you Ron... you've been a mentor a protector of souls a friend of reviews skipping mysterious news mentor of faith in our cafe of life always follow your heart ...and we grow.... in those oceananic blue eyes of yours to a very special soul & dear friend, whom I've known since 7th grade you've given me a lifetime of joy.... I Love You... Lee J. [This message has been edited by LeeJ (02-21-2008 07:25 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always follow your heart Awesome write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ 'sometimes a girl just needs to believe' My, my ... what a lovely ink pour from you~ Good to see you gal~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Much Enjoyed The Write LeeJ ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, your friend Ron sounds like the kind of friend everybody would like to have! ~ and I believe we attract what we ourselves are! To have a friend, one must be a friend ~ and good friends beget good friends! This loving poem of love, appreciation, and gratitude will surely touch the heart of your life-long friend. ~ A gift from one to another . Much love to both you and your friend Ron, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lee this just makes me smile so big. So nice to see you here and read your words again. Hugs. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
LeeJ, It's really great to see you again. Ron sounds like a great guy. Nice poem, as usual. Bobby |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: There is rarely a time when I read your poetry that I can center on one stanza that says it all for me...usually I would end up copying everything and taking up bandwidth... but these lines are particularly pleasing and soundly sentimental to this heart. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
sometimes a girl just needs to believe her heart lives deep in a far off time where some symphony strings her deepest most inner essence where men and women become one...no longer seperate but true souls of mankind Amazing offering, dear LeeJ. So good to have you back here, I am grateful for your inspired presence here. love Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Oh my, thanks so much dear friends, for stopping by to read and leave a special hello. Yes, Ron is a very special guy, matter of fact, one of the most special boys and men in my life...always a gentleman, a generous heart...a soul who loves unconditionally...we've been friends for a long long time....and it just seems like yesterday I first met him..we had so many classes together in school...he was so loved by so many gals...such a handsome young man...and still is....but not nearly as beautiful as the heart and soul he owns. Ohhh my, he shines such light...and love for mankind... I felt it was time he needed to know that he is respected, admired and loved, dearly and the world has been a better place with him in it... Thanks again, to all of you, for taking the time to read. Lee J. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Well done Lee J. Beautiful write. JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I wanted to bring this back up in tribute to my friend Ronnie, as he passed away a year ago, and when I wrote this, he was ill...I miss him dearly, a true friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
(((((((LeeJ))))))) May he soar in bliss back Home into God's loving arms. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Lee. I'm so sorry to hear of your loss. I hope you will find an opened closure, when it is time. Love K |
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