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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR 
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Woes and worries of Every day, String themselves out on lines that fray. Thoughts and memories that speak the truth, Is all that’s needed in existing proof. The determination to battle the storm, Comes from stepping outside the norm. The will to work and be at play, Stems from the heart, be that at is it may. |
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LynnFromCT Member
since 2008-02-18
Posts 53CT, USA |
the words rhymed but the meter was off. And I am not sure I like the way it ran. Maybe it;s just me... I will read more of your work. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write here I liked it and it flowed fine to me |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
It worked for me Kristabell, Good job...... John "Ignorance is the Enemy...." |
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