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Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti Junior Member
since 2006-07-04
Posts 24germany |
Invisible.... Every one says be happy life ain't that bad. There right of course but I'm still sad. No amount of reasoning seems to help me. I feel all alone at times so completely... Miserable.... Nothing I do seems to turn out right. At war with everything all I do is fight. Surrounded by enemies in a foreign land. Outnumbered by folks who don't understand... Inevitable.... Here I go again searching for the light. The truth to guide my way through the night. All i think is truth, i find covered in lies. But I'll keep searching I know its rise... Predictable.... I can hide how i feel though it changes. Even as I see my truth it rearranges. Bringing me back to my sad sedated state. Wont give up just a minute to clear my plate... I Will Never GIVE UP!!!!! Everyday I see a sunrise is a blessing, Every night I see the moon rise is a miracle. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Even as I see my truth it rearranges." Isn't that the pits? Just when you find it...it changes! |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
You're not alone -- I've felt this same way so many times. So thanks for helping me remember I'm not alone; even when I've felt no amount of reasoning could change my feelings either! I guess sometimes it just takes the right words to lighten the gloom -- and yours did it! Thanks for a great write! -Venus |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I believe the last line says it all and sums it up perfectly. Always, there is hope |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this Piece! ARCTIC WIND |
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